Check out this brief excerpt from my upcoming release THE SPIRAL PATH as part of this week’s Six Sentence Sunday offering:

Rafael sprawled in the command chair of the Interlace, head back, arms dangling down, fingertips brushing against the decking. His uniform jacket hung open. Calendra draped herself over his naked chest and the long cloudlike tendrils of her hair wrapped him in a cocoon of ecstasy and pain.

Around him the crew thrashed, locked in their own torture with the Revenant.

He heard Calendra’s thoughts like a whirlwind across his mind, shared her pain and pleasure along every nerve ending. The woman had endured agony for a thousand years — at least until she’d found him.

15 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday”

  1. Holy smokes! I just cannot wait to read this. Excellent snippet!

  2. I need more! Great excerpt!

  3. Very interested in reading more. Intriguing six!

  4. Awesome. *whew* That’s some alien encounter! Can’t wait to read the rest, Lisa. What’s your release date again?

  5. THe description of her hair is what got to me the most. Very good!

  6. Yowza! Will have to check out the book! And man, I’d be interested in a sequel with Rafael…if you don’t kill him off. LOL

  7. Wow, that was awesome! Can’t wait to read more!

  8. Very exciting snippet!

  9. Ecstasy and pain. So well done. Very intriguing.

  10. Well that’s more than interesting. You’ve got a lot of worldbuilding and characterization packed into those six sentences. Great Job!

  11. Oh, my, I want to read more of that!

  12. Oh my! Very interesting!

  13. That was such a great six sentences! Wow! I’m going to have to check out this book when it’s released. Email me a buy link when it’s up. I love SFR!

  14. That’s very intriguing. More please!

  15. Whoa, that’s interesting! :-O

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